Just To Say, Just One More Time

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The act of aging is no blight;
unless I’m wrong, I could be right –
An act of love is no mistake,
except for those who cannot wait.

Patience is a virtue, dear;
and now I’ve learned too late I fear.

Goodness goes in time of need,
a boon bestows on act and deed.
Courage girds the buckling knees;
virtuous words, a couple of “please.”

Forgive, forget, two acts of right;
to live regret, will stew all night
and cast a pall of rue at light.

That plum I ate? was aged so;
if truth be told, I now admit,
(in aftermath, you need to know)

It wasn’t that good –
so get over it!

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(revised 6 Jan 12)

Copyright © 2011 Marvin Loyd Welborn. All Rights Reserved.

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Comments

  1. I love the line “…courage girds the buckling knee…” The end-rhymes make your poem work. I hear something in this poem–talent. Keep writing, especially pay close attention to craftsmanship. Study the art and master it. I hear something, and it’s something poetically wonderful.

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  2. This is a charming write and a great expression, patience is truly rewarding and difficult, something I have to work with myself daily! Enjoyed, thank you for the visit and comment on my piece this week, my best to you! ~ Rose

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    • glad you asked. my whole piece comes from a poem by William Carlos Williams (This Is Just To Say), a famous piece, and I took a humorous slant with it. It’s funny you ask about plums, because the first time I wrote mine, I put ‘prunes’ and not plums, because prunes can be allied to old-age; but I took it out so as to ‘fit’ properly with Mr. Williams’ poem. that’s the story. thanks for asking, though.

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  3. Wow, this is full of wisdoms. You have written it in such a beautiful way. It was like walking through a field of wild roses – the beautiful smell, but got pricked a fair few times.

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